A candidate on the fence at offer time is usually missing one of four things, and the fix is to put all four in writing. The number, exactly. The start date and what the first day looks like. The one thing they told you mattered, confirmed. And what happens next, with a time. Most "I need to think about it" is really "something I care about is still vague."
Why candidates sit on the fence
They have another offer, or hope for one. The pay was said out loud but never written. The start date moved once and they are not sure it will not move again. They told you on the first call that nights would not work, and nobody has said whether this is nights. Or they simply do not know what happens after they say yes.
None of these are objections you need to overcome. They are questions you have not answered yet.
The four-line offer note
Send it the same day as the offer, and read it to them on the phone.
- The number. "$34 an hour, paid weekly. First check Friday the 14th." Not "competitive." Not "around 34."
- The start. "Monday the 4th, 6 a.m., Gate B. Ask for Dana. Bring your card and steel-toe boots."
- The one thing you said mattered. "You told me no weekends. I confirmed with the site: Monday to Friday only."
- What happens next. "I'll call you Sunday at 5 p.m. to check you're set. If anything changes before then, call me."
Then ask: "Is there anything in there that doesn't work for you?" The real hesitation comes out now, while you can still fix it.
Three more tips that work
Ask about the other offer directly. "Are you weighing this against something else?" People tell you. Then you know whether you are competing on pay, start date or something else.
Do not push on pay you cannot move. If the number is the number, say so and move to the other three lines. Candidates respect a straight answer more than a dance.
Shorten the gap. A candidate who says yes on Tuesday for a start three weeks away has three weeks to change their mind. If the client can start them sooner, do it. If not, call once a week with something real.
What not to do
Do not create false urgency. "The client has two other people lined up" works once and costs you the candidate's trust forever. Do not promise things the client has not agreed to. Do not go silent after the yes. The yes is where the no-show risk begins.
Where M-Tracker fits
The offer note and the confirmation note have a standard: the four lines. M-Tracker checks each one against it before it goes and tells the recruiter in plain words which line is missing. The note that reaches the candidate has the number, the start, the thing they cared about, and the next step, every time.
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Questions people ask
How long should I give a candidate to decide?
Two business days for most roles. Ask when they will know and call them then.
What if they want more money than the offer?
Ask the client once, with the candidate's evidence. If the answer is no, tell the candidate the truth and let them decide.
Should I keep a backup candidate warm?
Yes, honestly. "You're my second choice for this one and first for the next" is a sentence candidates can live with.
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