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Revision request template: ask for changes people can make in one pass

A revision request template that lists each change with where it is, why it matters and what to do, plus what to keep. Copy it and get revisions right in one round.

Feedback people can act on has three parts: what, why, doWHATPoint at it.“The price change is inparagraph four.”WHYOne reason.“The client reads the firsttwo lines.”DOThe change.“Move it to the firstsentence.”Delete: “Not quite there.” “Tone feels off.” “You always rush these.” “Take another pass.”

Number each change. Say where it is, why it matters and what to do. Say what to keep. One clear request saves two more rounds.

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When to use it

Any time work comes back for changes: a design, a draft, a report, a page. It works for clients asking an agency, and for managers asking their team.

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The template

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Revision request · [deliverable] · round [1/2/3] · [date]KEEP AS IS- [What works and should not change]CHANGES (most important first)1. Where: [page, section, line, timestamp]   Why: [one reason: the reader, the goal, the brief]   Do: [the specific change]2. Where:   Why:   Do:NOT IN THIS ROUND- [Ideas for later, so they do not sneak in]Next: [send it back by date / no need for another review after these]
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A filled example

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Revision request · Spring webinar landing page · round 1 · May 6KEEP AS IS- The headline and the speaker photos.CHANGES1. Where: the date line under the headline   Why: readers in California saw the wrong time   Do: show "June 12, 1 PM Eastern / 10 AM Pacific"2. Where: the sign-up form   Why: six fields cut sign-ups last time   Do: keep name and email only3. Where: the last section   Why: the brief says no pricing   Do: remove the pricing tableNOT IN THIS ROUND- A video on the page (next campaign)Next: send it back by Thursday. If these three are done, it is approved.
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Tips

  • Most important first. If only one change gets made, make it the right one.
  • Point, do not describe. Quote the line or give the section.
  • Say what to keep. Otherwise good parts get rewritten.
  • Say what happens next. "Approved after these" ends the loop.
How M-Tracker helps

Where M-Tracker fits

M-Tracker gives work a first review against the brief before it reaches you, so many of these changes are made before you ask. Clients can approve or request changes from a link, and every revision is counted. No screenshots and no activity tracking.

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Feedback people can act on has three parts: what, why, doWHATPoint at it.“The price change is inparagraph four.”WHYOne reason.“The client reads the firsttwo lines.”DOThe change.“Move it to the firstsentence.”Delete: “Not quite there.” “Tone feels off.” “You always rush these.” “Take another pass.”
FAQ

Questions people ask

How many changes should one request have?

As many as needed, but rank them. More than ten often means the brief was unclear.

Should I explain why?

Yes, in one line. It helps the person fix similar things next time without asking.

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