People and HR  ·  9 min read

A good review phrase names the work, says what was good or what to change, and why it mattered. "Great job" teaches nothing. "Your pricing handout was approved first time because you checked the numbers with finance first" teaches a habit. Use the phrases below as starting points, then fill in the real work.

Feedback people can act on has three parts: what, why, doWHATPoint at it.“The price change is inparagraph four.”WHYOne reason.“The client reads the firsttwo lines.”DOThe change.“Move it to the firstsentence.”Delete: “Not quite there.” “Tone feels off.” “You always rush these.” “Take another pass.”
What happened, why it mattered, what to do next.
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How to use these phrases

Each phrase has a blank: [the work]. Fill it with a real project, report or task from the review period. If you cannot think of one, the phrase does not belong in the review.

Mix strengths and growth areas. Most people need three or four of each, not twenty.

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Quality of work

Strengths

  1. "Your [report] needed no changes before it went to the client. That saved the team a full round of edits."
  2. "You checked [the numbers] against the source before sending. Because of that, finance trusted the figures straight away."
  3. "Your work on [the launch page] met every point in the brief, including the small ones people often miss."
  4. "When [the data] looked wrong, you flagged it before building on it. That stopped a bigger problem."
  5. "You set a high bar on [the handout] without slowing it down. It shipped on time and first time."
  6. "Your [code changes] came with clear notes, so reviews were quick."
  7. "Clients often mention how clear your [summaries] are."
  8. "You spotted the gap in [the brief] and asked about it on day one, not day five."

Growth areas

  1. "[The proposal] came back twice for the same issue: missing pricing details. A quick check against the brief before sending would catch this."
  2. "Some of your [reports] had small errors in the numbers. Let's add a two-minute check before they go out."
  3. "[The campaign] met the deadline but missed two must-haves from the brief. Next time, tick off the must-haves first."
  4. "Your first drafts are strong on ideas but light on detail. Try listing the done checks before you start."
  5. "When something is unclear, you sometimes guess. Asking one question early would save rework later."
  6. "[The deck] looked rushed in places. Leave time for one read-through before sharing."
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Communication

Strengths

  1. "Your status updates lead with risks. I always know what I need to act on."
  2. "You explained [the change] to the client in plain words. They agreed on the first call."
  3. "You told me early that [the project] was slipping. That gave us time to fix it."
  4. "Your emails are short and clear. People reply quickly because they know what you need."
  5. "In meetings, you bring a recommendation, not just a problem."
  6. "You wrote down the decision after [the meeting], so nobody had to ask what was agreed."
  7. "You adjust how you explain things for the audience. Engineers and clients both follow you."

Growth areas

  1. "I sometimes hear about blockers late. A one-line message when you are stuck would help."
  2. "Your updates list everything done, but the risks are at the bottom. Put them first."
  3. "In [the client meeting], the key point got lost in detail. Lead with the answer."
  4. "Some messages need a clearer ask. End with who should do what, by when."
  5. "You tend to stay quiet when you disagree. Your view is useful. Please share it in the room."
  6. "Long emails sometimes go unread. Try three lines and a link."
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Teamwork and collaboration

Strengths

  1. "You helped [Sam] get through [the migration] without being asked."
  2. "Your feedback on others' work is specific and kind. People act on it."
  3. "You shared your template for [the report], and now the whole team uses it."
  4. "You made handovers easy by writing clear briefs for [the designers]."
  5. "When [the deadline] moved, you rearranged your work so the team could still deliver."
  6. "New hires say you are the person who explains things best."
  7. "You give credit to others in public."

Growth areas

  1. "When you hand work over, the brief is often short. Add who it is for and what done looks like."
  2. "Feedback on others' drafts sometimes comes late. Within a day keeps work moving."
  3. "You sometimes fix others' work yourself instead of telling them. Tell them, so they learn."
  4. "Try to bring others into decisions earlier. [The process change] surprised some people."
  5. "Your reviews can feel blunt in writing. Say what works first, then the one change."
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Ownership and reliability

Strengths

  1. "You owned [the vendor switch] from start to finish. I never had to chase it."
  2. "You hit every deadline this period, and told me early the one time it was close."
  3. "When [the bug] came up on a Friday, you made sure customers were told and it was fixed Monday."
  4. "You follow through on meeting actions. If your name is on it, it gets done."
  5. "You fixed the cause of [the repeat issue], not just the symptom."
  6. "You keep your tasks up to date, so anyone can see where things stand."
  7. "You say no to work that does not fit our goals, and explain why."

Growth areas

  1. "A few actions from team meetings went past their date without an update. A quick note helps."
  2. "You take on a lot. Let's look at what can be dropped so the important work gets your best time."
  3. "When plans change, update the task so others are not working from old information."
  4. "Sometimes you wait for permission when you could decide. On [this type of work], you can make the call."
  5. "Estimates have often been too low. Add review time and a buffer."
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Problem solving and initiative

Strengths

  1. "You noticed [the onboarding drop-off] in the data and suggested the fix that raised setup completion."
  2. "You tested two options for [the email] before choosing. The winner did 20% better."
  3. "You found a way to cut [the report] from two hours to twenty minutes."
  4. "When [the tool] broke, you found a workaround the same day and wrote it up for others."
  5. "You ask 'why' until you find the real cause."
  6. "You brought three new ideas to [the planning session], and one is now on the roadmap."

Growth areas

  1. "You jump into fixing quickly. Spend ten minutes on the cause first."
  2. "Your ideas are strong. Back them with a small test or a number, so they are easier to approve."
  3. "When you hit a wall, you keep pushing alone. Ask for help after an hour."
  4. "Try writing down two options before choosing. It makes your thinking easier to follow."
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Goals and results

Strengths

  1. "You moved [setup completion] from 41% to 55%, most of the way to our 60% target."
  2. "Your work on [the help articles] cut support tickets by a third."
  3. "You linked your weekly plan to our quarter goals. Your time went where it mattered."
  4. "You delivered [the project] on budget and two days early."
  5. "You set your own targets for [the newsletter] and beat them."

Growth areas

  1. "A lot of your time went to requests outside our goals. Let's agree what to say no to."
  2. "Your goals for next period need numbers, so we both know what success looks like."
  3. "[The project] finished, but we did not measure whether it worked. Add a check after launch."
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Growth and learning

Strengths

  1. "You took the feedback on [the first drafts] and the next three needed no changes."
  2. "You learned [the new tool] quickly and trained two others."
  3. "You ask for feedback before reviews, not just at them."
  4. "You took on [the client calls] to grow, and they now go smoothly."

Growth areas

  1. "Next period, let's focus on [one skill]. I'll pair you with [a teammate] on it."
  2. "You said you want to lead projects. Owning [the next launch] would be a good first step."
  3. "Writing is the skill that would help you most right now. Short, clear, answer first."
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Phrases for your own self-evaluation

  1. "I delivered [project], which [result with a number]."
  2. "One thing I would do differently is [the honest lesson]. Next time I will [the change]."
  3. "I want more feedback on [skill], earlier in the work."
  4. "For next period, my goals are [goal 1] and [goal 2], tied to the team's goal of [team goal]."

Want a draft from your notes? Try the self-evaluation generator.

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Write the full review in minutes

Paste what the person delivered and the tool writes a review in plain words, with strengths, one or two growth areas and next goals. It also has a mode that checks a review you wrote for vague or unfair phrases.

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Phrases to avoid

  • Personality words. "Abrasive," "lazy," "not a team player." Describe the action instead.
  • Vague praise. "Great attitude." Say what they did.
  • Always and never. "You never meet deadlines." Name the dates.
  • Comparisons. "Not as fast as Sam." Compare to the goal, not to people.
  • Surprises. Nothing in a review should be news. Give feedback when the work happens.
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FAQ

Questions people ask

How many phrases should a review have?

Three or four strengths and one or two growth areas. More than that gets skimmed.

Should I use these word for word?

No. Fill in the real work. A phrase without a real example sounds like a template, because it is.

How do I write a review for a strong performer?

Be just as specific. Name what to keep doing, and one stretch goal so they keep growing.

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